Hey everyone. Here’s the first page done of my Cleon comic. Hope you all enjoy!

1 : Anonymous2021/08/14 23:42 ID: p4iqsr
Hey everyone. Here's the first page done of my Cleon comic. Hope you all enjoy!
2 : Anonymous2021/08/14 23:50 ID: h8yyslh

I'm drawing this to improve my drawing skills and plus I just really like Leon and Claire as a couple lol. I hope you all enjoy it. I'm not sure how long it will end up being but I want to do a good job on it. So it may take a while before I finish it all. Page two is being done right now.

ID: h8z9nd2

Keep drawing, don’t let down votes or crappy opinions on here stop you. Keep going you’re doing great. I like your work keep it up I look forward to reading it when finished

ID: h8zajbt

Thank you! I'm going to try to see it through and finish it. Your username cracked me up btw lol

3 : Anonymous2021/08/15 02:10 ID: h8zfbbd

This is actually a good comic and you can see the effort and attention to detail that went into it. I think that the facial features (especially the mouths) could do with improvement, but I definitely look forward to seeing future entries.

ID: h8zgf7f

Thank you! I agree on the mouths. They baffle me on how to draw them probably but I'm going to keep trying to make them better.

4 : Anonymous2021/08/15 02:48 ID: h8zjm6n

Keep drawing! Really enjoyed your comic 🙂

ID: h8zlwem

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

5 : Anonymous2021/08/15 06:19 ID: h903ykc

this is actually really cool, nice work.

ID: h90rp1t


6 : Anonymous2021/08/15 13:46 ID: h913bol

Awesome work! Looking forward to seeing the finished comic!

ID: h913tac

I appreciate it!

7 : Anonymous2021/08/15 14:30 ID: h918r6i

This is legitimately awesome. I can tell you have a lot of potential - keep it up! I hope to see your books in stores in the future!

ID: h91cn8q

Lol thank you! That makes my day!

8 : Anonymous2021/08/15 10:31 ID: h90lr03

WHERE ARE CLAIRE LEGS XD the rest is good

ID: h90rsln

Thanks! Claire is covered up in a blanket lol that's why you can't see her legs.

9 : Anonymous2021/08/15 17:42 ID: h91zy4o

Why is Claire a paraplegic? She looks like Ricky Berwick

ID: h924a9w

She's covered up with a blanket lol.

10 : Anonymous2021/08/15 04:08 ID: h8zs8ht

Nice work squire.

My advice would be to find your way into some more action quicker - you have lots of lore that the fanbase will be aware of already - keep the exposition in the background, and let your characters get quickly into a more riveting narrative.

It looks great, but in my opinion you’re putting in loads of effort, art-wise, without your protagonists really getting anywhere story wise?

Keep it up bud, i’m def gonna stay tuned to see where you go with it!

ID: h8zv1j2

Thank you for the advice! The 2nd page will wrap up things here and get them on their way to the more interesting part of the story. I didn't want to drag out parts that didn't need to take too long lol.


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