- Hey everyone. Here's the first page done of my Cleon comic. Hope you all enjoy!
I'm drawing this to improve my drawing skills and plus I just really like Leon and Claire as a couple lol. I hope you all enjoy it. I'm not sure how long it will end up being but I want to do a good job on it. So it may take a while before I finish it all. Page two is being done right now.ID: h8z9nd2
Keep drawing, don’t let down votes or crappy opinions on here stop you. Keep going you’re doing great. I like your work keep it up I look forward to reading it when finishedID: h8zajbt
Thank you! I'm going to try to see it through and finish it. Your username cracked me up btw lol
This is actually a good comic and you can see the effort and attention to detail that went into it. I think that the facial features (especially the mouths) could do with improvement, but I definitely look forward to seeing future entries.ID: h8zgf7f
Thank you! I agree on the mouths. They baffle me on how to draw them probably but I'm going to keep trying to make them better.
Keep drawing! Really enjoyed your comic 🙂ID: h8zlwem
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
this is actually really cool, nice work.ID: h90rp1t
Awesome work! Looking forward to seeing the finished comic!ID: h913tac
I appreciate it!
This is legitimately awesome. I can tell you have a lot of potential - keep it up! I hope to see your books in stores in the future!ID: h91cn8q
Lol thank you! That makes my day!
WHERE ARE CLAIRE LEGS XD the rest is goodID: h90rsln
Thanks! Claire is covered up in a blanket lol that's why you can't see her legs.
Why is Claire a paraplegic? She looks like Ricky BerwickID: h924a9w
She's covered up with a blanket lol.
Nice work squire.
My advice would be to find your way into some more action quicker - you have lots of lore that the fanbase will be aware of already - keep the exposition in the background, and let your characters get quickly into a more riveting narrative.
It looks great, but in my opinion you’re putting in loads of effort, art-wise, without your protagonists really getting anywhere story wise?
Keep it up bud, i’m def gonna stay tuned to see where you go with it!ID: h8zv1j2
Thank you for the advice! The 2nd page will wrap up things here and get them on their way to the more interesting part of the story. I didn't want to drag out parts that didn't need to take too long lol.